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IRON page 05 by JonathanWyke IRON page 05 by JonathanWyke
IRON

Page 5 of IRON.

Please excuse my extremely dodgy writing!





MangaStudio / Illustrator / Photoshop

EDIT: Very slight changes to speech bubbles, adding some direction arrows.


IRON is 2013 Jonathan Wyke
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PinPastor Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013   Artist
The dialoge is Ok, i just feel that the speech balloons should have the direction line.
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JonathanWyke Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013   General Artist
I didn't want direction lines. I'm just trying to show chatter rather than direct conversation. The sort of thing you overhear in a bar for instance. Could well be I'm not showing that well enough.
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DeevElliott Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Looks great, Jon!! Looking forward to seeing more of this.
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JonathanWyke Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013   General Artist
Cheers Dave! It's a fun little thing to play with, and short too, which is good.
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DeevElliott Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Short stories can sometimes be the most rewarding.

Great work.
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