Idiot Wind, page five.
I'm still pottering away on this, and have now reached page 5.
What I've tried to do here is to show the female lead's emotional - and physical - movement away as the page develops, going from close-up to further away with her back turned as she leaves. Hopefully that works, but please shout out if you think it's too clumsy.
Once again, no text adds yet. I'll be (probably) adding it all in once I've done the first ten pages or so.
Idiot Wind is ©2011 Jonathan Wyke
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