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Jaguar Page 07 by JonathanWyke Jaguar Page 07 by JonathanWyke

Here's page seven. I'm still trying to get out ahead as May looks horribly busy!

Thoughts, criticism and comments are, as always, very welcome.

Jaguar is also published here - jaguar.thecomicseries.com/comi…

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NoirZone Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I like the style and the camera angles, especially panel 1 and panel 2. 

According to my taste I'd like to see a more dynamic panels layout composition, but it's just a personal opinion, nothing wrong there
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JonathanWyke Featured By Owner May 12, 2014   General Artist
Panel 2 is my favourite, but it was a bugger to get right! I'm trying to split the panel and layout composition - keep it plain and simple (dull) where there's no action, then try to funk it up for the drama...
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NoirZone Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I see your point!
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