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Well, as I said, I was thinking about doing a webcomic, and this would be it I guess, if anyone would be interested.
Opinions, thoughts and critiques would be gratefully recieved as I polish it up.
MangaStudio / Illustrator / Photoshop
Story & Art are ©2014 Jonathan Wyke
Opinions, thoughts and critiques would be gratefully recieved as I polish it up.
MangaStudio / Illustrator / Photoshop
Story & Art are ©2014 Jonathan Wyke
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It looks good. The drawings are perfectly shaped, as usual. The grey/black shading is quite simple and effective, good thing imho. And the touch of colour in the gorilla eyes is key to create expectation for the next pages. So i think that the overall rating is high. Cause i really enjoy your style is kind of difficult to point anything negative to comment. But i´ll try. In the panel #4 i feel that the shadows should go closer to black. Panel #5 is drawn in a style different from the other 4 panels, particularly if we compare it with the handgun drawing. I really dont mind this kind of thing happening, i honestly like what some people consider "inconsistent" comic art, and this is not even the case.
I'll post a critique further on the story.
I'll post a critique further on the story.